All art belongs to ~mattbob3194 But these are all my OC's and i would love for you to critque them because im thinking i should change somethings And yes....Sayomi has a big bust and its staying that way -_-
From left to right we have: Suki, Isako and Sayomi. Personalities below.
Suki's father is unknown and her mother died of illness at a young age, She was adopted by the Chiaki Clan and has lived with them since she was only a very young age. Suki has no care about her appearance, she is a very confident, kind and some what bossy person with a tendency to get ahead of things which can lead to rather "sticky" situations. She hates how protective Sayomi is of her but she is aware that its only because she loves her. Suki has a small crush on Konohamaru which she can get very embarrassed about it as she is often teased about it from none other then her loving sister Sayomi XP Shes loves Sakura-Chan as another sister and is training to become a Medical-nin.
Isako's parents meet in the Hidden Sand village many years ago, Her mother is a Kunoichi from that village but moves to the Hidden Rock so she could stay with the lover Rikudon. Isako is a very "chill" person and is rather Intelligent, She hates to lose but can accept defeat. She has a high Stamina but lacks ability in Genjutsu. Isako has high respect for the Village especially the Tsuchikage and will take on an order without any Hesitation but she has a so called "free spirit" which he inherited from her mothers side, which often leads her into trouble with her wondering off all the time to do her own thing. Isako does have a small crush on C, She noticed him at the 5 Kage Summit and hasn't gotten him out of her head :3. Seh also loves Beef Jerky
Sayomi was a very shy child at a young age but but now she is generally overbearing, if not blunt towards to others and is rarely afraid to speak her mind, Sayomi also has a very short temper and can become a rather cruel Kunoichi if you insist on pissing her off, She also has a very perverted mind, but shes good at hiding it. Its unknown were Sayomi inherited her Scorch style as neither of her parents obtain it and because of this she has only mastered basics of her jutsu from lack of sensei. Sayomi cares of her sister greatly and will not allow any harm towards her even if it means risking her own life. Her childhood was very simple and easy going, she was only a baby when the ninetails attacked like many of the other shinobi of her age, Her father was seriously injured in that attack but fortunately he survived. She has a tendency to show a very soft, caring and shy nature around Kankuro but still keeps her bluntness when speaking with him, Sayomi also has a rather strong relationship with Sakura-chan, Kiba-Kun and Tenten. She loves them like they are part of her family.
i know you say a big bust and its staying that way , but maybe just so fixing on the shape :$ Sayomi looks more like shes has inplans , i found when i draw bigger chested woman you have to think of it kinda like lady tsunade because there bigger they dont stay as up and out as they do on say a b chested woman , they go more down a bar dose help but not normaly to that point but if your gonna use lady tsunade as help keep in mind shes older so her boobs are even lower i hate to say it like this but .... boobs they sag .:$ but i think :iconThe-porcelainDoll" dose hace a point , if you fix the hipps it may helpp with how the bust looks. but other then that i REALLY love Sayomi and Suki outfits there cutee <3 Your personal little things on all of them are so well written :3 amazing detail .
I really like them all, especially Suki, she's just a very cute character all around. One thing I would suggest though, is making Sayomi's waist and hips a little wider. Personally my main Naruto OC, Miko Takeshi, is also rather busty, but I've given her the waist and hips to compensate for her..how should I say..her "Heavy burden". That way she looks more proportional and realistic. Just a thought. All and all very adorable.
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